Could you tell me what you think of my song lyrics please?


i've wrote these lyrics , showed/sang them 1 other person , didn't seem understand until explained intending convey. hope read them or them catch on.

lovers blackmail


1, 2, 3
belong me
, can never leave, no,
mine keep.
though free come , go please
, me, know
there's no going
life knew before.

if ever thoughts grow heavy worry
, has begun desert me
won't waste time see face turn pale
let train derail

i'll leave
lover's blackmail

1, 2, 3
prisoner;
heart locked in tower
feel power.
far away earth
in heaven there's no hurt
in hell you'll never burn
under spell of no return.

oh, if eyes should ever cry tear
because life not kind hear
of in fairy-tales
i'll set sights on new horizons , sail

i'll leave
lover's blackmail

once told me
if love me let me go
don't let heart turn cold
never settle.

once told me
if love me let me go.
can still find have , hold
forever.

so, 1, 2, 3
only,
we'll stay in bed day
walk hand in hand through hallways
we'll see each other everyday in things
make out babies
see them crawling
through old age still falling
til day our graves calling...

, if love ever turns hate
, desire escape
i'll try understand it's fate have failed
live tell tale

of lover's blackmail
lover's blackmail

i'll leave
lover's blackmail...

i've wrote these lyrics , showed/sang them 1 other person , didn't seem understand until explained intending convey. hope read them or them catch on. lovers blackmail 1, 2, 3 belong me , can never leave, no, are...


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