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please give detailed responses, give me improvments, tell me if accidentally copied someone. emma xx

mary, mary
[verse 1]
she's fresh off vogue, beauty queen,
13 when stepped out scene,
far young have lost naiveté,
watch dance golden sunlight,
painted smile on face never turns frown
[chorus]
mary, mary dear dear mary,
jus turned 16 , you've forgotten how dream,
mary mary dear dear mary,
why did let standard go low self-esteem
mary mary dear dear mary
there's more life vodka , pills threw down throat
[verse 2]
walks around doesn't have care
, that's seems people out there
inside been broken down
far away safe , sound
she's alone, , lost in wold morals wrong
she's been waiting these years found
[chorus]
mary, mary dear dear mary,
jus turned 16 , you've forgotten how dream,
mary mary dear dear mary,
why did let standard go low self-esteem
mary mary dear dear mary
there's more life vodka , pills threw down throat
[bridge]
she's standing on the trains racks screams empty sky 'i'm not waiting die, i'm waiting saved'
[chorus]
mary, mary dear dear mary,
jus turned 16 , you've forgotten how dream,
mary mary dear dear mary,
why did let standard go low self-esteem
mary mary dear dear mary
there's more life vodka , pills threw down throat
[outro]
mary mary, dear dear mary
i'm sorry lost head
mary mary, dear dear mary
i'm sorry lost game , ended dead

please give detailed responses, give me improvments, tell me if accidentally copied someone. emma xx mary, mary [verse 1] she's fresh off vogue, beauty queen, 13 when stepped out scene, far young have lost naiveté, watch dance golden...

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