What do you think of this poem for my girlfriend?


on top of other gifts i've got wanted give girlfriend little more personal christmas year, hence wrote poem. feel should opinions on before give because want best possibly can, thank in advance, constructive criticism appreciated.

forever
dream come true
no amount of time quite enough
when next

lifetime
life spent
id love till end
, hearts extent

year
frankly not enough
apart
affliction far tough

single month
break heart in 2
no words describe pain feel
when away

week
unforgivable
teasingly short time
beautiful

day
special twenty 4 hours
hide away world
in place solely ours

hour
time thats far brief
pain , longing i’d feel
of there no relief

fleeting minute
crush being
id tell you're gorgeous
, you’re

ten seconds
perfect time 2
ten seconds takes
love you

on top of other gifts i've got wanted give girlfriend little more personal christmas year, hence wrote poem. feel should opinions on before give because want best possibly can, thank in advance, any...


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