What do you think of my poem?


middle school library had poem contest in october. won 4th place. poem had biggest fear. there maximum of 5 winners. here's poem wrote , entered:

fear of heights
when high,
feel i'm going fall
feel i'm going sick
feel scared
fear wraps around me
fear takes on mind
goosebumps form on skin
body starts shake
teeth rattle
way
ground
take deep breaths
, climb down


think it? first line title

my middle school library had poem contest in october. won 4th place. poem had biggest fear. there maximum of 5 winners. here's poem wrote , entered: fear of heights when high, feel i'm going to...


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