If you were a teacher what would you give this poem. I am in 8th grade.?


grade give 1-4. personalized version of poem if in charge of world.is there way make better (for exp grammar, organization)

if in charge of world
if in charge of world
i'd cancel crime , treason,
pollution,
bullying,
, racism.

if in charge of world
there nfl game every day,
green bay packers fan,
super bowl held in philadelphia every year,
, tickets more affordable.

if in charge of world
no 1 die due cancer,
poverty , hunger,
there wouldn’t street drugs,
or cigarettes,
if in charge of world
snow every day,
wouldn’t have ask marshmallows in hot chocolate,
, person forgot not fool
, forgot follow rules,
still allowed
in charge of world.

if in charge of world
id revoke broccoli,
being new york giants fan,
curfew teenagers,
, people saying sorry without meaning it.

if in charge of world
there better lunch cafeteria food,
smaller class periods,
school weeks monday-thursday
, school wouldn’t start early.

what grade give 1-4. personalized version of poem if in charge of world.is there way make better (for exp grammar, organization) if in charge of world if in charge of world i'd cancel crime and...


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