What is your opinion regarding my poem?


sweet little angel:

sweet little angle, why crying?
why eyes give me rain?
soul turning shred , dying
hear voice colored in pain

come me , hug you, warming heart
strawberry roses flourish @ once
smile shine piece of art
making soul sing , dance

sweet little angel: sweet little angle, why crying? why eyes give me rain? soul turning shred , dying hear voice colored in pain come me , hug you, warming heart strawberry roses flourish @ once smile shine piece of art...


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