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question: questioning in authority necessary?

true should question authority in instances, have said. examples history , literature illustrate this.

in famous play william shakespeare, star-crossed lovers romeo , juliet defy authority when run off , elope. historically find case of galileo galilei, called "father of science", hypothesized earth revolved around sun.

in william shakespeare's romeo , juliet, young aristocrat juliet meets , falls in love impecunious romeo. juliet's father, capulet, happy this, , not allow marry boy. instead has hopes of marrying paris, rich , handsome relative of prince escalus. however, defies father's authority , instead marries romeo. capulet ends disowning daughter action. although love ended tragically, romeo , juliet went against authority , chose love instead. exemplifies questioning authority must @ times done.

romeo , juliet defied parental authority, did galileo galilei defy rulings of catholic church. during 15th century, galilei proposed earth in fact revolved around sun , not center of universe, thought many, including catholic church. in time when questioning authority of church blasphemy, galilei accused of heresy , subsequently thrown in jail. of course galilei's hypothesis, know, correct. galileo galilei put prison questioning established idea of authority, though authoritative beliefs inaccurate. can see pushing boundaries of , questioning authority necessary greater good.

in conclusion, necessary authority questioned. whether personal happiness or greater good, rules must broken.

question: questioning in authority necessary? true should question authority in instances, have said. examples history , literature illustrate this. in famous play william shakespeare, star-crossed lovers romeo , juliet defy authority when they...

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