Is the poem I wrote ok?

i'm writing poem school, tell me how is. owo

when boy of 10,
had father of great wisdom.
powers predict
when next earthquake hit.
thought god,
others thought fraud.
thought father gifted,
mother wanted curse lifted.
called specialist claimed know how break hex,
, rushed him our apartment complex.
there sat, chanting song sounded animals @ zoo, until
world split two.
didn't matter if father's powers existed degree,
because now, there no more earthquakes foresee.

i'm writing poem school, tell me how is. owo when boy of 10, had father of great wisdom. powers predict when next earthquake hit. thought god, others thought fraud. thought father gifted, mother wanted his...

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