What do you think of these lyrics?


wrote song based on recent relationship. please gentle , constructive :) it's called whiplash

mind's twisted
i'm messed
between thinking want me , hate me i'm stuck
3 words said
mean @ all?
did nothing drive me wall

tell me love me
that's fine
we're friends
it's kick behind
tell me want me
supposed think
changing directions in space of blink
gave me whiplash
, i'm on brink

i'm not girl
sits , waits
boy fickle comeback , stay
why way
you've made me way

tell me love me
that's fine
we're friends
it's kick behind
tell me want me
supposed think
changing directions in space of blink
gave me whiplash
, i'm on brink

why i,
why still here
have nothing lose, have nothing fear
last chance
i'm telling
can stay me or not have me @

cause give me whiplash,
, i'm on brink, yeah
on brink

i wrote song based on recent relationship. please gentle , constructive :) it's called whiplash mind's twisted i'm messed between thinking want me , hate me i'm stuck 3 words said mean @ all? did nothing drive me the...


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