How does my poems sound?


when saw tears flood eyes
couldn't feel bad inside
wanted hug , tell ok
, here everyday 

smile lights me inside
dimmed when saw cry
wanted hold tight , tell ok
, here everyday
want see smile again
lights never go off

when saw tears flood eyes couldn't feel bad inside wanted hug , tell ok , here everyday  smile lights me inside dimmed when saw cry wanted hold tight , tell ok , i...


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