"My Cat" would you critique this poem?


sleeps on head,
little breathes snuffled fur, onto ear.
6:00 o'clock, better when alarm says to,
better bag of gravel out of pantry
, pour tin bowl,
wait long, meows screech in alarm-clock melody.
later on,working, fuzzy tail knocks papers on ground,
tell stop -- makes nest in them.
"aww" in admiration of cuteness,
pick , organize.
chases several types of mice, favorite being 1 hooked screen,
steps on keyboard --there goes essay.
fixing supper, add thyme on chicken,
, addition of fluff sneaks way in,
popping out, kind little reminder feed meow-er eat.
pour gravel, time bed,
paws stuck onto face, fluffy mittens comfortable...
...the first 5 minutes.
still gotta love kitten,
there's -- not sure what,
can't imagine life without
cat.

sleeps on head, little breathes snuffled fur, onto ear. 6:00 o'clock, better when alarm says to, better bag of gravel out of pantry , pour tin bowl, wait long, meows screech in alarm-clock melody. later on,working, fuzzy tail knocks papers on the...


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