Found an old poem I wrote, is it any good?

stumbled across old lyrics wrote when 14-15 years old. it's nice find wrote or drew when younger because gives glimpse of past , thoughts when wrote it.

here is:

humanity's gone
stand here alone
ages have passed us,
, turned stone.

millenniums whisper,
truths in our ear
it's strange how wise become
if we're willing hear.

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think trying express 1 humanity not listen messages history gives us, in "those not know history destined repeat it". it's reference how modern man has become ignorant , arrogant , lost connection true nature because if humanity can evolve beyond boundaries of science, mustn't forget came from. otherwise lost more gain.

think it's pretty english 2nd language, right?

i stumbled across old lyrics wrote when 14-15 years old. it's nice find wrote or drew when younger because gives glimpse of past , thoughts when wrote it. here is: humanity's gone stand...

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