Are these lyrics any good?

know, i'm beginner. criticism welcomed!
                next time
verse:
time
when happened again
didn't call
because never came

pre-chorus:
got text
called
said
we're though

chorus:
, remember the 
last time weren't mine
guess i'll see 
next time

verse:
cause time
happened again
never call
because never came

pre-chorus:
got text
called
said
we're though

chorus:
, remember the 
last time weren't mine
guess i'll see 
next time

bridge:
left me
when loved
see
sorta hate

verse:
cause time
when happened again
never call
because never came

chorus:
, remember the 
last time weren't mine
guess i'll see 
next time

just know, i'm beginner. criticism welcomed!                 next time verse: time when happened again didn't call because never came pre-chorus: got text called said we're though chorus: , remember the  last time you...

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