Is my poem any good..?

think better if wrote age-relateable. drunk @ thirteen, haunted demons, doubt it. why don't tell how thirteen in uk. or write null in meaning, purely aesthetic--like nature.

the day slow.
night long.
drowning you're sorrows,
along.

minimum wage,
livining memories of drunken haze,
take sip,
promise no more,
demons standing,
right @ you're door.

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