What do you guys think of this poem?


need honest , tell me think. . .

love
marble , engraved letters
not had in mind
dark suits , raindrops
surprising reunion everyone.

broken heart,
4 years wasted.
world darkens
nothing makes sense.

bottle of poison
dry sand
mind clouded of reason
hope shattered

readings , memories
rainstorm continues
sad songs , photographs
numbness increases

moving in speed
emotions become overwhelming
starts rain
colors flash

immediate excitement
numbness spreads
down bottom
forever loved

i need honest , tell me think. . . love marble , engraved letters not had in mind dark suits , raindrops surprising reunion everyone. broken heart, 4 years wasted. world darkens nothing makes sense. bottle of poison dry sand mind...


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