What do you think of my poem? i havent finished yet plz answer?


rough 1 sorry short havent finished

heart, soul without linger hopelessly in chimes of fallen
echoes of wounded, cries of children
desperasion among us, lovers scream, poets dream, hearts filled ecstasy

im sorry know pretty bad , btw dont know how set out poem words , lines etc. hope u it

its rough 1 sorry short havent finished heart, soul without linger hopelessly in chimes of fallen echoes of wounded, cries of children desperasion among us, lovers scream, poets dream, hearts filled ecstasy im sorry know its...


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